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Thursday, 5 August 2021

Rugby Game

 Last Friday we played rugby, we played against St Marys. When we got there we started running round the field in a group, if we weren't in close together we had to do it again, but we did it good the first time.  Our coach is trying to teach us to work together as a team. Then we did some drills\passing to each other.

Then they kicked to us. Me, Max, Cash, Rori and Cory we're off on the sideline. Stormur got the ball and ran up, then got dropped on his back and they got the ball and scored a try. Then I hopped on from off the sideline and I got a good tackle and then I  got the ball and passed to Stormur, he ran up and scored a try.

Then it got to half time and we had a talk and Rori, Cory, Cash and Max got on and we started to scored more tries. In the end we lost 50-60.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Oska. Firstly, I like the way you have used paragraphing correctly in this blog post. Secondly, this recount reminds me of last week's game. You got so many tackles, which was amazing! Was it fun, and did you receive any injuries? The game was pretty close. From Rori.

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  2. Kia Ora Oska,
    I like how you have added lots of different bits of punctuation in your blog post. What was the best part about playing rugby with St Mary's school? I liked how you explained who, what, were, when, why & how. The game seemed pretty close!
    From Betsy

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  3. Kia Ora Oska,
    I like how you have added lots of different bits of punctuation in your blog post. What was the best part about playing rugby with St Mary's school? I liked how you explained who, what, were, when, why & how. The game seemed pretty close!
    From Betsy

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