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Thursday, 29 July 2021

rugby training

First we did a lap round the field in a bunch. Then we went in groups of 2 or 3 and passed to each other in a line. Then we had turn at tackling the bags. Then we had a game of rugby we kicked to the other team and Vinnie  got the ball and started to run with it and i tackled,   then we got the ball and  scored a try.


Then the coach told us to play two handed touch and that was dumb then we went back to tackle. They kicked off to us and Reef got the ball and ran up with and scored a try. Then the bell rang and we went back to school and we ate lunch. I can't wait until tomorrow's game!  



2 comments:

  1. Hi Oska, I like how you used commas and full stop and paragraphing it remind me of when you tackled Vinnie.

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  2. Kia Ora Oska,
    I liked how you have added information about who was in your team and what you were doing, very clearly. How many People are in your rugby team? I also like how you made it very clear with some detail.

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